Fantastic Realms, Ordinary People
Aug. 20th, 2019 10:50 pm
My epic fantasy with tentacles The Weird of Hali hasn't gotten a lot of reviews yet, but one of them -- a favorable review of Dreamlands on the Ashtar Command Book Blog -- has me thinking. The reviewer liked the book, and managed to catch some of the less obvious bits such as the reference to JRR Tolkien. He commented in a bemused tone, though, on the fact that the characters in Weird of Hali aren't special. They're ordinary people -- in the case of Dreamlands, of course, the main character is an elderly college professor with terminal cancer, and the rest of the cast includes a gay Bostonian writer from the 1920s, an assortment of other professors and grad students, and a rat-sized prosimian (a primate related to lemurs and tarsiers) of a species unfamiliar to science but quite familiar to anyone who's read H.P. Lovecraft's "The Dreams in the Witch-House." (Okay, I grant that an otherwise unknown species of primate is a bit exotic, but she's not noticeably more so than, say, a pet monkey.) Now of course that's part of the point of the series, but it got me thinking.
The hero of the first fantasy novel that really had me staring in awe at nothing in particular for days afterwards is perhaps the most ordinary character in all of literature. Yes, that would be Bilbo Baggins, a hobbit of respectable family who spends most of The Hobbit in a state of confustication and bebotherment (his terms), having been flung into the middle of a madcap adventure involving dwarves, wizards, trolls, goblins, elves, and a bona fide dragon. He's far from the only relentlessly ordinary character in classic fantasy. Go all the way back to the first fantasy novel ever written -- William Morris' The Wood Beyond the World -- and you've got Walter, a guy who walks away from a disastrously failed marriage via the first available boat. Yes, he's as ordinary as that sounds, even though he rises to the challenge of a series of astonishing adventures and ends up becoming a king.
That was pervasive in classic fantasy. Even Conan the Cimmerian started out as another dumb kid from the barbarian North before a taste for adventure and a lot of heavy challenges turned him into the iron-thewed thief, warrior, and (eventually) usurping king he became. Somehow, though, that got lost, and a large amount of fantasy got sucked into a single narrative -- the story of a special snowflake, uniquely talented at whatever, who's marked out for a Really Shiny Destiny because (s)he's, well, just so special. Or has super-powers, or super-duper-powers, or super-duper-pooper-powers, or what have you.
That kind of thing bores the bejesus out of me. Back when I was into comic books -- he're we're talking a long, long time ago! -- I liked characters like Batman and Green Arrow because they didn't have super-powers -- just courage, motivation, some nice technogimmicks, and a really robust exercise routine. My favorite characters in fiction, from childhood faves right up to the present, are ordinary people; even if they have one unusual feature (say, a talent for music like Brecken Kendall, or tentacles for legs like Laura Marsh), that doesn't keep them from being ordinary in every other sense, and having to scramble to deal with fantastic challenges the way you and I would have to do. They rise to the occasion -- that's what makes them protagonists -- but it doesn't come naturally and they have to give it everything they've got -- that's what makes them interesting.
Is this purely a quibble of mine, or is this something other people have noticed too? Inquiring prosimians want to know. ;-)
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Date: 2019-08-21 04:52 am (UTC)And that's when Rick is a hero. The rest of Casablanca he's just an adventurer: slick, strong, smart, but nobody you really care about. WP Kerr drew a strong distinction between the hero and the adventurer. Writers who think what the characters do in the setting is what characters do in the story keep sliding back from writing about heroism, which is hard and means something, to writing about adventures, which is easy and doesn't mean much.
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Date: 2019-08-21 05:58 pm (UTC)Agreed.
Date: 2019-08-21 08:59 am (UTC)Though I'm not the greatest HP fan out there, as a young woman, I appreciated that Hermione was a muggle, with no inherited magical talent, and yet she sat at the top of the class because she read all the books and then some.
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Date: 2019-08-21 10:15 am (UTC)Special snowflake stories tend to bore me to death as well these days. As a child born in the 70s, Star Wars was the first story that I really identified with as you did with Lord of the Rings. I'm sure that there were special snowflake stories before Star Wars. As I read your post it occurred to me that perhaps a story where the special snowflake power ends up being a stumbling block, curse, not useful, etc.; and the main character has to deal with that and learn the hard way a new skill or whatever it is as most of us do to get through might be interesting. To turn the special snowflake narrative on it's head as you did with the Haliverse.
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Date: 2019-08-22 12:50 am (UTC)There have actually been some decent stories about a special power that turns out to be as much hindrance as help; as one of the other commenters noted below. Peter Parker aka Spiderman is a good example! Still, there's plenty of room for more stories like that. Have you considered writing one?
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Date: 2019-08-21 01:13 pm (UTC)On some level, I think we all want to identify with the protagonist. The duality you're describing here displays two very different worldviews -- the first is "I'm valuable and I hope someone recognizes that," and the second is "If I scramble hard enough, maybe I can become valuable/do something valuable."
That's a no-brainer for me. I'm always going to want to read about the scrappy nobody pushing themselves to do something amazing.
- Dudley Dawson
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Date: 2019-08-21 01:38 pm (UTC)And even when they have powers, the real heroes have to rise to the occasion to be the just wielders of such powers.
Even in comics.
If you look at Marvel Comics we have Spiderman that gained his powers by a fluke of chance, and that looses his uncle because he wasn't using his powers with responsibility. All the others stories of Spiderman are of him using his powers because he has too. He'd rather stay home and cuddle with Mary Jane, living a pretty ordinary life, but the fact that he has power while other people don't forces him to be their champion. He's just an ordinary guy in extraordinary circumstances.
On the other extreme (and also with powers)we have Doctor Strange that perfectly and unwillingly exemplifies the hero path.
He starts his quest as an arrogant Son of a Barbarian. He's vane, shallow, arrogant, mean... a putrid excuse for a person.
And like so many before him he's forcibly humbled. He's hurt in his flesh and in his mind, and for a long time he travels to the bottom, to the pits of despair, to his personal hell. When he has lost almost everything he hears someone talk about the Ancient One, and in his desperation clings to that shadow of hope.
Puts all his faith, all his hope in somethings that for all he knows does not exist, CAN NOT exist. A reverie, a rumor, a myth, a SORCERER.
And when he finally reaches he Ancient One whatever is left of his hope is crushed. His hands can not be healed. He will never be a surgeon again.
And now that he's reduced to nothing starts his journey to greatness. He can't leave the Sanctuary because there's a storm that would certainly kill him and is forced to accept the hospitality of the Ancient One. And then by "chance"/Karma/destiny/fate he finds out that the disciple of the Ancient one, Baron Mordo is making magic to kill his teacher... and Baron Mordo finds out that he knows...
Mordo's reaction as we all know is to put a spell on him to gag him, prevent him to warn the Ancient One, while being able to talk about everything else.
That is the TSW moment for Stephen Strange.
And now he has a purpose and what Don Juan called a worthy opponent.
Eager to free himself from Mordo's spell and willing to help the Ancient One he asks the Ancient One to be accepted as a student. He willingly starts on the path of knowledge and after many years he takes upon his shoulders the duties of the Ancient One, the mantle of Sorcerer Supreme.
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Date: 2019-08-21 01:48 pm (UTC)That is what bugs me in Harry Potter, and on Star Wars. Just by being born the Wizards and Jedi already have gifts, are already destined for greatness. They're a master race. What a strip mining concept.
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Date: 2019-08-21 01:54 pm (UTC)To me your worlds are ordinary. WOH and Retrotopia are both worlds that could be this one. The "gods" are ordinary. Even the baddies are ordinary.
The few "special snowflakes" aren't really they are just typical "flakes".
And I've really enjoyed the "decline" in WOH. It's ordinary also.
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Date: 2019-08-21 02:11 pm (UTC)Prizm
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Date: 2019-08-21 02:13 pm (UTC)Then again, I'm the wrong person to ask because I'm currently enjoying Red Hook.
-Kyle
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Date: 2019-08-22 05:13 am (UTC)Spot On
Date: 2019-08-21 03:10 pm (UTC)I'm in the same mind as you in regards to comic books: I used to like those same two characters: Green Lantern & Batman for the same reasons you listed. I also liked Reid Fleming: The Worlds Toughest Milkman and Tank Girl. Neither of them had any special powers. Tank Girl just liked to hang out with mutant kangaroos and drink malt liquor and that appealed to me as a teen!
I'm working on some writings about punk rock and how its mindset might be applied to green wizardry now and your little piece here struck me with an interesting parallel. Part of why punk was so well liked because it stripped away the status of the mighty rock star. The music wasn't that hard to play. Anyone could do it. Nothing against musical virtuosity or skill on my end, but the fact that it made it accessible, and you didn't have to be this god on a stage, brought music back to ordinary young folks.
Punk gave permission to just get on with it, take action and do things. That's one of the attitudes necessary for green wizardry and for the predicament of this time: just get on with it! Don't wait for some authority figure or whoever to give you permission. Just do the thing. You can be an ordinary dude, suburban, urban or rural in your background, and through your own volition, can take some action in regards to your circumstances whatever they may be. As Steve Ignorant of Crass said in an interview, āThere has to be an alternative to the dole, do something creative.ā Don't wait for the corporations or the government to change. Make those changes in your own life yourself.
Of course maybe Bilbo didn't want to take action or do anything except eat some cheese, have a pint, and smoke some pipeweed before fiddling about in his garden. Yet circumstances outside his control stepped into his life and made themselves known, as they did to Frodo, and they became heroes even if they didn't start out as such. Even more so for good Samwise Gamgee. He was just swept up into the events (even if eavesdropping).
Part of the turn off of the superhero hype is they never seem to struggle against anything. (And the plots are boring and predictable -what's the point of reading/watching the next installment of the same-old-shale?)
I like characters I can relate to, people with problems & struggles. I'm not sure where/when fantasy went the way it did, or all the reasons why. That would be an interesting article or research project. (It might have something to do with Baby Boomers.)
I don't even mind characters with abilities, or talents. They are preferably ones they've worked on through the usual means, i.e, practice. Yet maybe the zeitgeist of our special snowflake times wants to reinforce the attitude that things can be got and accomplished for nothing, just by being oh so unique you; no efforts required beyond having radioactive nuclear waste dumped on you, or being born this way with a special mark on the forehead.
As the great internet catalog in the sky fades away, as the benefits from industrial cultures propped up lifestyle dwindle, I think we may see a return to a preference for characters who have to work to see their goals made manifest. With the usual obstacles reality likes to throw in the way. Perhaps, even, the climax of these tales won't be convenient explosions.
Justin Patrick Moore
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Date: 2019-08-21 03:30 pm (UTC)I can recommend some, if you like, in science fiction and fantasy that my kids and I enjoy.
BoysMom
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Date: 2019-08-21 03:36 pm (UTC)I have been working on a quick descriptive teaser
THE MOON LOTUS
They discovered the not so mythical monster behind the destruction of the living world. They want to stop the monster and defend the living world ā¦..
But they have
No super powers
No amazing new technology
No mad ninja fighting skills
No vast fortune
And No chance if they act alone
(The script is coming along nicely, but the artist who I was hoping to work with has decided to do other projects at this time. Ugg, but what is an adventure without setbacks.)
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Date: 2019-08-21 03:54 pm (UTC)When I think of Frodo especially... he didn't go on the quest because he wanted fame or glory, but because he was compelled to do so for ethical and moral reasons to help a world outside of his own concerns and self. That held a weight over him and on him that made all of what he had to go through imperative.
In much contemporary & pop fantasy it seems that the focus is on the identity of the character more than how they act in the world they live in. And the conflict is usually a vendetta or villain who is, as you've oft pointed out, super-evilly evil (just because mwha ha ha). The gravitas has been lost in favor of prolonged belly button gazing.
Ordinary characters in ordinary conflicts with ordinary oppositional forces is something I'd like to read (and write)!
You seem to have struck a chord... thanks for hosting this conversation.
JPM
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Date: 2019-08-21 04:19 pm (UTC)I think this is the key. Ultimately, the kinds of stories JMG is criticizing here are a subclass of those that are less about the world through which the protagonist goes and more about the world inside the protagonist. These kinds of stories get more and more "air time" for the same reason that memoirs are crowding the best seller lists; as a culture, we now find it so hard to deal with the world (which, as JMG never tires of pointing out, doesn't always do what we would like it to do) that we retreat into the "safe space" of self-obsessed fantasy at any opportunity.
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Date: 2019-08-21 04:03 pm (UTC)Related, the rise of characters who literally can't fail at anything they try (I play enough D&D I call it "Can't roll less than a natural 20") just make for boring movies.
I'm thinking in particular of one of the halfway recent Star Wars movies in which a particular character was unable to fail at anything she tried, and which led to both an awful movie and the elimination of the very limited remaining interest I had in paying any attention at all to that franchise.
This is part of why I like long form D&D games as well - you start out with impressive but not utterly insane characters, and then build them over time into something epic that becomes something very unique. A good novel should do the same. Cardboard cutout characters are just boring to read.
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Date: 2019-08-22 05:30 am (UTC)Oh, yes! And don't get me started on "powers creep"
Date: 2019-08-21 05:45 pm (UTC)Then check out other well-read series of urban fantasy. Same deal. Or as with Sookie Stackhouse in True Blood, it turns out she's part Faerie. Even Kitty, the talk show werewolf, got a taste of that in the later books. Gaaaah.
Pat, who really liked those characters back when they were human beings: Anita and Sookie each with a talent more troublesome than otherwise; Kitty, the victim of a virus transmitted by being bitten, and an abusive pack.
I used to think the cartoon character Underdog satirized the special snowflake quite nicely.
Pat, whose guilty-pleasure reading you all now know about.
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Date: 2019-08-21 11:16 pm (UTC)(Also, and it's weird that *I'm* saying this: LKH really needs to learn that you can write/read more than one sex scene with the same partner. The MG stuff's gotten to the point where I think I need an HR chart to keep track of all the guys, because the way to move the plot along is either Introduce New Brooding Sulky Guy or Have Previously Reasonable Dude Become Brooding and Sulky. Sigh. Distinct lack of quality technicolor elf erotica out there, alas.)
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Date: 2019-08-21 07:04 pm (UTC)The narrative of the chosen one has become so popular because it corresponds to the inflated sense of entitlement in the modern society. You are destined for greatness! I think this trope relates to a "Mary Sue" type of character. Or perhaps it is a plot device (over)used by lazy authors to get the story going?
Batman is an insufferable Mary Sue though, I think, or at least has grown to be one over the years. Also he is a billionaire which makes it hard for me to relate. :)
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Date: 2019-08-21 07:51 pm (UTC)I hope you will like the story Iām typing up now, about a bunch of thoroughly average folks. One guyās attractive enough to earn money modeling, but that donāt help him foil the fooftawoos! ( I hope everyone else likes it too. If I canāt interest a book publisher Iāll put it out on Amazon.)
Thereās an indignant 14-part fisking of the Star Wars movie with the invincible grrrl. Iāll find the link & submit it. Itās pretty funny even if, like me, you havenāt seen that movie. (I gave up on Star Wars long, long ago.
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Date: 2019-08-22 05:35 am (UTC)Epic Star Wars Indignation
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Date: 2019-08-21 11:05 pm (UTC)One of my favorite novels as a kid was Robin McKinley's "Hero and the Crown," which features a heroine who learns to kill dragons because it's something for her to do, discovers an anti-dragonfire ointment through sheer stubbornness and research, and eventually ends up saving her country basically by being too cranky to die slash get controlled. That always struck me as a good model for life.
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